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Jul. 21st, 2009 03:07 pm
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"Our little Jaime's all grown up and making out with super heroines," Paco said, wiping a fake tear from his eye. "Where does the time go?"

Dinner with the Reyes' and Mia had gone well. Nobody had any problems with Mia, Mia hadn't seemed to have a problem with any of them, and no super villains had attacked El Paso because they somehow sensed that there were two super heroes in the same place at the same time.

After saying good night to the Reyes, and waving Jaime and Mia off to continue their evening with a little more privacy (wink wink, nudge nudge), Brenda and Paco had gone for ice cream.

As friends, you guys. Geez.

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Jan. 7th, 2008 12:20 pm
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How did a kid with such short legs get to the Scarabmobile before he did?

"No, Milagro." Paco said, pulling her away from the car. "You need to stay here, where its safe."

"But--"

"No buts!" he vaulted into the Scarabmobile and almost elbowed Brenda in the head as she buckled herself into the passenger seat. "You need to stay here too -- someone's gotta watch her until Mrs. Reyes gets home."

"I don't need a babysitter!" Milagro objected loudly. Brenda opened her mouth to object but then seemed to think better of it.

"Fine, but only because you'd accidentally wreck the place if left on your own." she said, unbuckling her seatbelt and climbing out of the car. "Go!"

Paco stomped on the accelerator and drove, wracking his brains for some idea where he could find the Peacemaker. Jaime needed back-up five minutes ago, and Paco was pretty certain that a sidekick-inna-car wasn't going to cut it.

Giants in El Paso. That was new.

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